2017/04/28 Homework

Hi [이름]!

A bright afternoon to you! ^^

Thank you for your effort in doing your homework. ^^ I really appreciate it.

Essay would really help you especially in terms of your

grammar, spelling and sentence construction.

Keep it up! ^^

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Teacher Glenda

Here are my corrections:

A festival of my university in 2012 was the most large-scale event of my life.

>> A festival in my university in 2012 was the largest-scale event of my life.

More than 10k people attended the festival.

>> Correct

Actually, I saw SISTAR who is one of the most famous girl groups in Korea in real, and I become a fan of them after watching on their Performance.

>> Actually, I saw SISTAR who is one of the most famous girl group in Korea, and I became a fan of them after watching their performance.

The song and performance was perfect and each of them was so beautiful.

>> Correct

Also, many street vendors found in that site, I enjoyed the nice foods with my best friends there.

>> There were also many street vendors at the site and I enjoyed the nice food with my best friends.

Sometimes I become to return to that time.

>> Sometimes, I wanted to go back at that time.