2017/04/28 Homework

Hi [이름]!

Good afternoon! ^^

Thank you for sharing this. \")

Like what other people say, Happiness is a choice.

I would also agree with you. Being healthy would definitely play

a big role if you want to be happy in life. :)

So let\'s keep our body healthy. :)

See you!

Teacher Glenda

Here are my corrections: 

I believe the most important key is health to maintain a happy life.

>> I believe that the most important key to maintain a happy life is health. 

Especially I would like to emphasize strongly what a physical health is really important.

>> I would like to strongly emphasize that physical health is really important.

Health is a essential base to achieve something including a happy life.

>> Health is an essential base to achieve something including a happy life.

All of the people do something such as getting a job, getting married, traveling to lead a happy life.

>> All people do something such as getting a job, getting married, traveling to lead a happy life.

or

>> Most people do things like getting a job, getting married or traveling to have a happy life.

If we are not in health, it will become very difficult or impossible to do something we want to achieve.

>> If we are not in healthy, it will be very difficult or impossible to do something we want to achieve.