2017/05/01 Homework

  Hi [이름]! ^^

A great afternoon!

I really admire your perseverance when it comes to learning.

It really is a self fulfillment being able to learn new things

and would give you an edge in your corporate life.

Keep it up! \")

See yah!

Teacher Glenda

Here are my corrections:

A Japanese Novel game influenced my life the most.

>> Correct

There was a Japanese novel game I had waited to be translated to Korean, but it wasn’t translated.

>> Correct

So, I decided to study Japanese by myself to play that game.

>> Correct

It was my start point of learning Japanese when I was 21.

>> Correct

or

>> I was 21 and it was the starting point for me in learning Japanese.

Thanks to learning Japanese, I could have a chance to work in japan, Singapore.

>> Thanks to learning Japanese, I got the chance to work in Japan and Singapore.

it means a lot to me because I can work globally and expand my point of view toward to life.

>> Correct [Just don\'t forget to make the first letter of your sentence in capital letter] :)