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2017-05-12 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

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I prefer get up early in the morning and start the day's work because I can spend more private time in the evening and night. I can do whatever I want to do such as working out, studying, or playing online games. Also, I can feel the day longer, if I start my daily life early in the morning. However, my real life is totally reverse to what I mentioned above because the earlier finishing the work, the more work. Eventually, work finishing time is always late night.

강사 첨삭

  Hi [이름]! ^^

It\'s finally Friday! \")



Thank you for sharing this.

There\'s just so much to do with so little time.

It\'s what I always tell myself, because I usually wake up late in the morning now a days. ;D

But I would have to practice sleeping early so that I could wake up early in the morning as well.

See yah! :)


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Here are my corrections:

I prefer get up early in the morning and start the day\'s work because I can spend more private time in the evening and night.

>> I prefer to get up early in the morning and start the day\'s work because I can spend more private time in the evening.

I can do whatever I want to do such as working out, studying, or playing online games.

>> Correct

Also, I can feel the day longer, if I start my daily life early in the morning.

>> Correct

or

>>>I can also feel that the day is longer if I start my daily activities early.

However, my real life is totally reverse to what I mentioned above because the earlier finishing the work, the more work.

>> However, my real life is totally a reverse from what I mentioned above because the earlier I finish working, the more work I get.

Eventually, work finishing time is always late night.

>> So eventually, my always finishes late at night.

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