2017/05/22 Homework

  Hi [이름]! ^^

A great afternoon! ^^

It would really be great just to go somewhere you want to go even just for short

term or long term.

Good choice! Going to an English speaking country would definitely

give you an edge in improving your English skills. :)

See you!

Teacher Glenda

Here are my corrections:

If I could live is somewhere for an year, I would like to live in Canada.

>> If I could live somewhere for a year, I would like to live in Canada.

Canada is the best place for me in terms of what I can learn American English and its cold weather.

>> Canada is the best place for me in terms of learning American English and I like it\'s cold weather.

I would live in Canada very comfortable.

>> I would live in Canada very comfortably.

Also, their culture is not for hardworking.

>> Also, their culture is no

It makes me being able to manage my work and private life balance by myself not defends on the working environment.

>> It will help me balance my work and private life that will not depend on my working environment.

So, if I have a chance to live another country for one year, I would choose for Canada.

>> So, if I will have a chance to live in another country for one year, I would choose Canada.