2017/05/29 Homework

2017-06-01 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

학생이 쓴 원문

I plan not to plan for anything after a busy week. I refresh myself with a long sleep first then I go out for a nice food such as Japanese and Korean food. When I eat nice foods, I feel really happy especially after hard working. Finally I work out and play online game. Sometimes I play online games with my Korean friends. It looks like very boring but I have realized that normal life like this is really precious for me.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름] ! ^^
A wonderful afternoon! ^^
Everyone look forward to weekends and I think we really deserve
those treats for working hard on the previous weekdays.
However, it is also a good habit to include practicing English
even during the weekends. :)
It will be a very helpful way to improve your English skills. ;)

See you!

~~ Teacher Glenda

Here are my corrections:
I plan not to plan for anything after a busy week.
>> Correct
I refresh myself with a long sleep first then I go out for a nice food such as Japanese and Korean food.
>> Correct
When I eat nice foods, I feel really happy especially after hard working.
>> When I eat nice food, I feel really happy especially after working hard.
Finally I work out and play online game. Sometimes I play online games with my Korean friends.
>> Correct
It looks like very boring but I have realized that normal life like this is really precious for me.
>> Correct

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