2017/05/31 Homework

  Hi [이름]! ^^

Great evening! ^^

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Thank you for sharing me about what you believe in.

I think, it is really important for us to have something we believe in.

It gives us hope and see our lives in a more creative and beautiful way. :)

Observe the corrected sentences I provided below. :)

See you! ^^

Teacher Glenda

Here are my corrections:

I will always believe in myself.

>> Correct
 Sometimes, I cannot believe in myself when I make the same blunder as what I made before in a work place.

>> Sometimes, I cannot believe in myself when I make the same blunder in my work place.

However, after all, I\'m is the only one who need to get over myself and be better.

>> However, after all, I\'m the only one who needs to get over myself and be better.

Also, I have to be responsible for all I did.

>> Also, I have to be responsible for all I do.

So, what I\'m supposed to do is believing in and controlling myself.

>> Correct

Finally, I feel get rewarded when getting over something very hard for me then I can believe in myself more.

>> Finally, I feel rewarded when getting over something very hard then I can believe in myself more.