2017/06/02 Homework

Hi [이름]!

I hope you are enjoying the most of your holiday. :)

Freedom, as they say is one of the greatest gift to people. But it also has

a great responsibility paired with it. We live under a government that speaks about freedom

and independence. May we use it in a good cause. :)

Let\'s review on the corrections and again practice it. :)

Thank you for consistently answering this short exercises

I give you. Keep it up.

You can always go back to it and use it as a reference.

See you!

Teacher Glenda

Here are my corrections:

My definition of freedom is what I can totally control or handle my time.

>> My definition of freedom is when I can have a total control and I can handle my own time.

 If I work for a company, it is not a freedom because my time is controlled by the company.

>> Correct

However, if I have my own company or work as a freelancer, it is freedom because I can control my time for myself.

>> Correct

 I feel it is really fantastic to have freedom in terms of what I mentioned above, because I can do what I want anytime.

>> Correct

Actually, Money which is my asset or revenue can make it feasible though.

>> Correct