2017/06/05 Homework

Hi [이름]! ^^

a great afternoon! ^^

Movies can actually open our mind about the real world. 

We might not be aware but most movies are influenced and are based on

what exactly is happening around us.

May it be political, spiritual or other aspects of life. :)

Also watch and English movie and try to summarize it.

It\'s a good exercise. ;D

See you!

Teacher Glenda

Here are my corrections:

I watched a Korea movie named \"the Mayor\" which about electioneering of Seoul mayor.

>> I watched the Korean movie entitled \"The Mayor\" which was about the election of mayor in Seoul.

This movie shows darkness of politicians and their politic life well.

>> This movie shows the darkness of politicians and their political life as well.

It also drew well about their humane aspects and their greedy ambition to a great power.

>> It also to draw well about their humane aspects and their greedy ambition for great power.

After I watched this movie, I felt all the characters in this movie live as if they live in the hell.

>> After I watched this movie, I felt all of the characters live as if they live in hell.

So, I thought that even I have a big power or much money; it is meaningless if my daily life is very hard for me to maintain those of it and I live everyday with anxiety.

>> So, I thought that even if I have power or much money, it is meaningless if in my daily life I live with anxiety.

or

>> So, I thought that even I have big power or much money, it is meaningless if my daily life is very hard for me to maintain peacefully and I live everyday with anxiety.