2017/06/09 Homework

Hi [이름]! ^^

Great evening! :)

You nailed it! :)

I have to say, I\'m impressed. :)

Thank you for sharing about this topic. I know that it can be a bit sensitive topic

but thank you for being bold enough to share your ideas.

It\'s the same way in learning English. Be bold. :)

Don\'t be afraid of mistakes because they will lead you to more learning. :)

Keep it up! ^^

See you!

Teacher Glenda

I totally think that there is no job to be done by only one part of gender.

>> Correct

All of the jobs in this world can be done by both part of gender.

>> All of the jobs in this world can be done by both genders.

It means that confining the job by gender is very inappropriate because it makes difficult or impossible for those who get a job regardless of gender even if they have a sufficient capabilities or abilities.

>> It means that confining the job by gender is very inappropriate because it makes it difficult or impossible for those who are looking for a job even if they have sufficient capabilities or abilities.

It also will be a great loss for society such as companies or Government organizes.

>> It also will be a great loss for society such as companies or Government organizations.

So, I would like to tell someone who discriminates and criticizes about it that that thinking is also discriminating yourself and it eventually makes limitation in your abilities.

>> So, I would like to tell someone who discriminates and criticizes men in doing such jobs is also discriminating yourself and it eventually makes limitation in your abilities.