2017/06/12 Homework

2017-06-16 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

학생이 쓴 원문

If I would choose either of them, I would rather choose never being able to make new ones. If I didn’t have old memories, I wouldn’t recognize who I am and I cannot use all I have learned so far. Also, losing all the old memories means that I cannot remember something new I learned in future. I learned the something every day for good. So, I prefer to have old memories even I cannot remember new things.

강사 첨삭




Hi [이름]! ^^

Great evening! :)


I would agree with you that having no memories of your past is like not knowing who

you really are. However, not making any new memories is also tragic. :)

It\'s just like being stuck in the past and not being able to move forward. :)

Anyhow, I wouldn\'t want to lose any of the two because who I am now is because of my

past and who will I become will be determined by what are still about to happen in my life. :D


See you!

Teacher Glenda

If I would choose either of them, I would rather choose never being (be) able to make new ones.

>>Correct

If I didn’t have old memories, I wouldn’t recognize who I am and I cannot use all I have learned so far.

>> Correct

Also, losing all the old memories means that I cannot remember something new I learned in future.

>> Also, losing all the old memories means that I will not remember something new that I might learn in the future.

I learned the something every day for good.

>> I don\'t exactly know what you mean by this sentence. :)

So, I prefer to have old memories even I cannot remember new things.

>> So, I prefer to have old memories even If I cannot remember new things.

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기

영어첨삭교정 ·