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2017-07-06 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

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If I had an ability to change one moment, I would want to change the moment when I was 21. Let me explain the moment. The moment was when I started to enjoy playing soccer even I had had an operation on my left ankle at 20 years old. I thought my ankle was cured perfectly, so I enjoyed playing soccer a lot. However, it got worse because of playing soccer a lot, so I had to get the operation again. If I had been able to control myself and not arrogant about my health at the age of 21, I would be able to avoid the 2nd operation.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름] ^^

Good evening! ^^


We have our own pieces of regrets. :)

But the good thing is, we can still do something about it, right?

It\'s not yet too late I think. :)

The most important thing about it is, we learned and will not do it again. :)

Just take it as a challenge and put your best in doing something about what

you regret doing in the past.


Teacher Glenda


 

If I had an ability to change one moment, I would want to change the moment when I was 21.

>> If I have the ability to change one moment of my life, I would want to change the moment when I was 21.

Let me explain the moment.

>> Let me explain for moment.

The moment was when I started to enjoy playing soccer even I had had an operation on my left ankle at 20 years old.

>>That time was when I started to enjoy playing soccer, even if I had an operation on my left ankle when I was 20 years old.

I thought my ankle was cured perfectly, so I enjoyed playing soccer a lot.

>> Correct

However, it got worse because of playing soccer a lot, so I had to get the operation again.

>> Correct

or

>>> However, it got worst because of playing soccer again, so I went through an operation again.

If I had been able to control myself and not arrogant about my health at the age of 21, I would be able to avoid the 2nd operation.

>> Correct

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