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2017-07-08 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

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What I would like to do now is studying at a university in Singapore to get a master. Getting a master is what I have never done. However, I need money high Toefl score to matriculate at the university. Actually, I believe I can enjoy the progress toward my goal that makes my life more alive. Also, being a student again is something like indicator telling the life goes well for me.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^^

Happy Friday! ^^


Thank you for sharing your piece about this topic. :)

Life goes on as they say. :)

It\'s never too late for anything and I would salute you with

your decision of making yourself advance more in education and career.

You deserve it. :)


Wishing you a wonderful weekend! ^^


Teacher Glenda



What I would like to do now is studying at a university in Singapore to get a master.

>> What I want to do now is to study in the University of Singapore to get a master degree.

Getting a master is what I have never done.

>> Correct

or

>> I have never done getting a master degree.

However, I need money high Toefl score to matriculate at the university.

>> However, I need money to get a high TOEFL score to matriculate in the university.

Actually, I believe I can enjoy the progress toward my goal that makes my life more alive.

>> Correct

Also, being a student again is something like indicator telling the life goes well for me.  

>> Also, being a student again is something like an indicator telling me that life is going well for me.  

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