2017/07/05 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^^
Happy Friday! ^^
Thank you for sharing your piece about this topic. :)
Life goes on as they say. :)
It\'s never too late for anything and I would salute you with
your decision of making yourself advance more in education and career.
You deserve it. :)
Wishing you a wonderful weekend! ^^
Teacher Glenda
What I would like to do now is studying at a university in Singapore to get a master.
>> What I want to do now is to study in the University of Singapore to get a master degree.
Getting a master is what I have never done.
>> Correct
or
>> I have never done getting a master degree.
However, I need money high Toefl score to matriculate at the university.
>> However, I need money to get a high TOEFL score to matriculate in the university.
Actually, I believe I can enjoy the progress toward my goal that makes my life more alive.
>> Correct
Also, being a student again is something like indicator telling the life goes well for me.
>> Also, being a student again is something like an indicator telling me that life is going well for me.
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