2017/07/19 Homework

Hi [이름]! ^^

Good afternoon! ^^

We are now in a digital world and everything is being done

with the help of technology. Books are now being forgotten and being

kept in libraries. But I hope both will move forward and hand in hand and be developed

for the next generation. 

Thank you for sharing your thoughts on this topic. :)

Please go over the minor corrections on your writing. :)

Teacher Glenda    

I think computers will be preferred in the future because younger generation gets more familiar to use electronic devices to read publications.

>> I think computers will be preferred in the future because younger generation get more familiar to the use of electronic devices to read publications.

Nowadays, many classes utilize computer devices and students use those kinds of things naturally.

>> Correct

or

>> Nowadays, many classes utilize computer devices and students use those kinds of things conveniently.

However, I prefer book in a paper to read the publications because I can feel that books are in real.

>> However, I prefer books to read publications because I can feel that books are more real.

Of course I use computer to study many times but it is just for sub, not a main part.

>> Correct

I cannot remember or study through only computers without writing.

>> I cannot remember or study without writing or through computers only.

Also, using pen and touching real books make me it is reading and studying which I cannot feel through computers.

>> Also, using pen and touching books makes me feel it is reading and studying which I cannot feel through computers.