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2017-07-20 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

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visit try book enjoy see fascinate take build travel overlook 1. I【saw】a lot of horse-drawn carriages in rural areas while I 【was traveling】through Bulgaria. 2. Every year, tens of thousands of tourists【visit】the Blue Mosque, which【was built】 by the Romans in the sixth century. 3. Helen 【couldn’t enjoy】 the crowded streets at all as there were a lot of people who 【were trying】 to sell souvenirs to tourists, which she found really annoying. 4. Be silent, please. I can't hear anything. I【am booking】a holiday in Virginia with the travel agency at the moment. 5. I 【don’t take】so many clothes with me when I go for a short vacation because I hate carrying around a lot of luggage. 6. Our hotel room 【overlooks】 the beach and we could also see the whole area of the hotel from there. 7. The natural and historical riches of Turkey 【fascinate】 millions of visitors from around the world.

강사 첨삭

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Teacher Glenda

1. I【saw】a lot of horse-drawn carriages in rural areas while I 【was traveling】through Bulgaria.
>> Correct
2. Every year, tens of thousands of tourists【visit】the Blue Mosque, which【was built】 by the Romans in the sixth century.
>> Correct
3. Helen 【couldn’t enjoy】 the crowded streets at all as there were a lot of people who 【were trying】 to sell souvenirs to tourists, which she found really annoying.

>> didn\'t enjoy, Correct
4. Be silent, please. I can\'t hear anything. I【am booking】a holiday in Virginia with the travel agency at the moment.

>> Correct
5. I 【don’t take】so many clothes with me when I go for a short vacation because I hate carrying around a lot of luggage.
>> Correct

6. Our hotel room 【overlooks】 the beach and we could also see the whole area of the hotel from there.
>> was overlooking
7. The natural and historical riches of Turkey 【fascinate】 millions of visitors from around the world.

>> Correct

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