2017/07/24 Homework

2017-07-31 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

학생이 쓴 원문

I would like to tell myself that “Don’t rush yourself. Takes time” Being in a hurry and rushing yourself cannot bring you something you want to achieve. Sometimes you need to time to think deeply and be flexible to other’s opinion so that you can face what you were not able to expect and get over it wisely. As you experience what I mentioned above, as you can be free from the anxiousness and more confident.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름] ^^

a wonderful evening! ^^

We always have something we want to tell ourselves.

May it be a motivation or an advice or something we want to hear other people to tell us.

Whatever that is, we sometimes should learn how to listen to the \'inner us\'.

But we have to be smart enough to know what is good to listen to and what not to listen to.

We should push to something positive and will lead us to the right direction. :)

Teacher Glenda

I would like to tell myself that “Don’t rush yourself. Takes time” Being in a hurry and rushing yourself cannot bring you something you want to achieve.

>> I would like to tell myself that “Don’t rush yourself, Take your time”, being in a hurry and rushing yourself cannot bring you what you want to achieve.

Sometimes you need to time to think deeply and be flexible to other’s opinion so that you can face what you were not able to expect and get over it wisely.

>> Sometimes you need to take time to think deeply and be flexible to other’s opinion so that you can face what you do not expect and get over it wisely.

As you experience what I mentioned above, as you can be free from the anxiousness and more confident.

>> As you experience what I mentioned above, you can be free from the anxiety and you will be more confident.

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