2017/08/02 Homework

Hi [이름]! ^^

Good Monday evening! ^^

Thank you for sharing about this place.

I have always wanted to visit either your country or Japan.

From this, I became even more interested in Japan. It seems to be a really beautiful place from how you

describe it.

Teacher Glenda

If I can live in another country for now, I would choose Japan Hokkaido because that place is not hot and the food is very nice.

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>>> If I can live in another country for now, I would choose Hokkaido, Japan because that place is not hot and the food is very nice.

Actually, Canada is also want to live but it is to get a chance to learn English more not for living purpose.

>> Actually, Canada is also a place where I can get a chance to learn about English more but not for living purposes.  

For the purpose of only living, Hokkaido in japan is perfect place for me. It is close to Korea either.

>> For living purposes, Hokkaido, Japan is a perfect place for me. It\'s also close to Korea.

Hokkaido has many beautiful and breathtaking places that made me to live there.

>> Hokkaido has many beautiful and breathtaking places that made me want to live there.

Finally the food in Hokkaido I assume it is the best of the courtiers I know would make me happy all the days if I would live there.

>> Finally the food in Hokkaido I assume, is the best.  I know it would make me happy all the days if I would live there.