2017/08/09 Homework

Hi [이름]! ^^

Good afternoon ^^

We all have our own weak areas and we can only be either a person

who does something to overcome that weakness or a person who just

accept it and do nothing about it and use as a reason not be a better person.

And I\'m so happy to say that you are of the first kind of person. :)

Let\'s continue being better than who we are now. :)

Teacher Glenda

My biggest weakness in life is that I’m quick-tempered.

>> Correct

It has sometimes brought me such a disappointed result especially in my work place.

>> It has sometimes brought me such disappointing result, especially in my work place.

This weak point also affect to other people. So, nowadays, I’m trying to get over it.

>> This weak point can also affect other people.

I take time to complete the work, think more about the progression if there is anything I don’t think of and hear more from my boss or my colleagues as soon as possible.

>> I take time to complete my work. I think more about the progression of my work and if I can\'t think of any, I get opinion from my boss or colleague immediately.

At the first time, It took a lot of time to get used, but now, I get used than before so the work progress smoothly and my boss also gave me some complimentary comments.

>> At first, it took a lot of time to get used to it, but now I got used to it and my job progresses smoothly and my boss also gives me compliments.

I believe that facing to the weakness point with admitting it and modest attitude was the first step to get over my weakness

>> I believe that facing my weakness and admitting with a modest attitude is the first step to get over my weakness.