2017/08/14 Homework

2017-08-18 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

학생이 쓴 원문

I totally agree with what strength and confidence come from our inner side. I believe this is self-regard that makes us more confident and strength. Also each of us is only one who knows well about and loves ourselves. So, if we don’t believe ourselves there will be no one who can make each of us strong and confident. Consequently, as we more regard ourselves, we give us more strength and confidence from inside and we can have a chance to be more than we can be.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^^

Good evening! ^^

Thank you for sharing your ideas and thoughts.

I would agree with you because the strongest motivation will come from

the inside.

Teacher Glenda

I totally agree with what strength and confidence come from our inner side.

>> I totally agree that strength and confidence come from our inner side.

I believe this is self-regard that makes us more confident and strength.

>> Correct

Also each of us is only one who knows well about and loves ourselves.

>> Also, it is us who knows well and loves our own self.

So, if we don’t believe ourselves there will be no one who can make each of us strong and confident.

>> Correct

Consequently, as we more regard ourselves, we give us more strength and confidence from inside and we can have a chance to be more than we can be.

>> Consequently, as we give more regard to ourselves, it gives us more strength and confidence from inside and we can have a chance to be more than what we can be.

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