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2017-08-25 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

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I would choose to be someone like “Nikola Tesla” because he had a very altruistic mind with high level of his revolutionary endeavor. Thanks to him, most of the people in the world can enjoy electricity at cheap price. If he tried to pursue much profit with his technology, he would be able to earn much money, but he didn’t for the human beings. Also, He shared many technologies at a free even he could earn money as much we cannot imagine. His wisdom, intelligence and modesty are my ideal asset I want to have ever.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^^

Goode evening! ^^


It\'s a good thing that are people like Nikola Tesla who wasn\'t blinded by money.

He left a very good legacy for the next generation to follow. :)

He is the epitome of goodness and greatness.

I guess it\'s a privilege to admire people like him.

Thank you for sharing. :D


Have a blast this weekend! ^^


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I would choose to be someone like “Nikola Tesla” because he had a very altruistic mind with high level of his revolutionary endeavor.

>> Correct

Thanks to him, most of the people in the world can enjoy electricity at cheap price.

>> Correct

If he tried to pursue much profit with his technology, he would be able to earn much money, but he didn’t for the human beings.

>> If he tried to pursue much profit with his technology, he could have earned much money, but he didn’t for all human being.

Also, He shared many technologies at a free even he could earn money as much we cannot imagine.

>> Also, He shared many technological inventions for free even if he knew that he could earn money as much we cannot imagine.

His wisdom, intelligence and modesty are my ideal asset I want to have ever.

>> Correct

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