2017/08/21 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
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Goode evening! ^^
It\'s a good thing that are people like Nikola Tesla who wasn\'t blinded by money.
He left a very good legacy for the next generation to follow. :)
He is the epitome of goodness and greatness.
I guess it\'s a privilege to admire people like him.
Thank you for sharing. :D
Have a blast this weekend! ^^
Teacher Glenda
I would choose to be someone like “Nikola Tesla” because he had a very altruistic mind with high level of his revolutionary endeavor.
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Thanks to him, most of the people in the world can enjoy electricity at cheap price.
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If he tried to pursue much profit with his technology, he would be able to earn much money, but he didn’t for the human beings.
>> If he tried to pursue much profit with his technology, he could have earned much money, but he didn’t for all human being.
Also, He shared many technologies at a free even he could earn money as much we cannot imagine.
>> Also, He shared many technological inventions for free even if he knew that he could earn money as much we cannot imagine.
His wisdom, intelligence and modesty are my ideal asset I want to have ever.
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