2017/08/28 Homework

2017-09-06 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

학생이 쓴 원문

1. Sore loser ・Be humble! All the people would leave you because you are such a sore loser. ・We can learn an importance not to be sore loser to grow up ourselves. 2. Social butterfly ・Listening well other’s opinion is a short cut to be social butterfly. ・You have a really kind attitude. It is so nice of you. No wonder you’re social butter fly. 3. Band-aid on a bullet wound ・It will never last for long. It is just Band-Aid on a bullet wound. We’ve got to find out the root cause. ・She tends to do Band-Aid on a bullet wound on what she did wrong and blaming others.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^^
Good evening! ^^
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1. Sore loser
& #12539;Be humble! All the people would leave you because you are such a sore loser.
>> Correct
& #12539;We can learn an importance not to be sore loser to grow up ourselves.
>> We can learn the importance of not being a sore loser to be mature.
2. Social butterfly
& #12539;Listening well other’s opinion is a short cut to be social butterfly.
>> Listening well to other’s opinion is a short cut to be social butterfly.
& #12539;You have a really kind attitude. It is so nice of you. No wonder you’re social butter fly.
>> Correct
3. Band-aid on a bullet wound
& #12539;It will never last for long. It is just Band-Aid on a bullet wound. We’ve got to find out the root cause.
>> Correct
& #12539;She tends to do Band-Aid on a bullet wound on what she did wrong and blaming others.
>> >> Correct

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