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2017-09-05 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

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First of all, I can say globalization is expending fast. It means we need to speak English to communicate other people who speak in different language because English is a basic language in the world. And most of the company wants to hire people who speak English or multiple languages including English. We are able to understand from this factor that people who can have more chance and more advantages to find a job they want. Also, in this information-oriented age, we can also take advantage of getting information we want by using English. If we stop learning learn English, we will be left behind.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^^

Good evening! ^^


Thank you for sharing your piece on this matter.

It\'s a fact that being bilingual or multi lingual can open more doors of opportunity

especially in the corporate world.

People get to be united as one with the use of a common language which is English. :)


T. Glenda


First of all, I can say globalization is expending fast.

>> Correct

It means we need to speak English to communicate other people who speak in different language because English is a basic language in the world.

>> It means we need to speak English to communicate with other people who speak in a different language because English is a universal language.


And most of the company wants to hire people who speak English or multiple languages including English.

>> Correct

We are able to understand from this factor that people who can have more chance and more advantages to find a job they want.

>> We can understand from this factor that people who can speak English can have more chance and more advantages to find a job they want.

Also, in this information-oriented age, we can also take advantage of getting information we want by using English.

>> Also, in this information-oriented age, we can take advantage of getting information we want by using English.

If we stop learning learn English, we will be left behind.

>> Correct

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