2017/09/01 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^^
Good evening! ^^
Thank you for sharing your piece on this matter.
It\'s a fact that being bilingual or multi lingual can open more doors of opportunity
especially in the corporate world.
People get to be united as one with the use of a common language which is English. :)
T. Glenda
First of all, I can say globalization is expending fast.
>> Correct
It means we need to speak English to communicate other people who speak in different language because English is a basic language in the world.
>> It means we need to speak English to communicate with other people who speak in a different language because English is a universal language.
And most of the company wants to hire people who speak English or multiple languages including English.
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We are able to understand from this factor that people who can have more chance and more advantages to find a job they want.
>> We can understand from this factor that people who can speak English can have more chance and more advantages to find a job they want.
Also, in this information-oriented age, we can also take advantage of getting information we want by using English.
>> Also, in this information-oriented age, we can take advantage of getting information we want by using English.
If we stop learning learn English, we will be left behind.
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