2017/09/04 Homework
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Hi [이름]! ^^
Good afternoon! ^^
Thank you so much for sharing about this. :)
It can actually become an inspiration to pursue a better life in the future.
I hope you are having a good day. :)
T. Glenda
I cannot image I’m not happy in 20 years later because I will have experienced many things of the life.
>> I can\'t imagine that I\'m not happy 20 years from now because I will have experienced many things in life.
But only my looks, physical ability and people around me will have been changed.
>> Only my physical looks, abilities and people around me will have been changed.
In 20years later, I’m 50years old, so, I may be a father of my children around 10~15 years old and my wife would be 30~35.
>> 20 years from now, I will be 50 years old and a father to my children that will be around 10-15 years old and a husband to my wife who will be 30-35 years old.
As a father of my family, I do my job well and make good result in my company or my own company.
>> Correct
or
>>> As a head of my family, I will do my job well and will make a good result in my company or in my own company.
In private and work, I enjoy the happiness in my daily life. Finally, I will be able to speak English and Chinese fluently which make my life more delight.
>> In my private life and at work, I will be enjoying the happiness in my life daily. Finally, I will be able to speak English and Chinese fluently which will make my life more delightful.
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