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2017-09-07 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

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I cannot image I’m not happy in 20 years later because I will have experienced many things of the life. But only my looks, physical ability and people around me will have been changed. In 20years later, I’m 50years old, so, I may be a father of my children around 10~15 years old and my wife would be 30~35. As a father of my family, I do my job well and make good result in my company or my own company. In private and work, I enjoy the happiness in my daily life. Finally, I will be able to speak English and Chinese fluently which make my life more delight.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^^

Good afternoon! ^^


Thank you so much for sharing about this. :)

It can actually become an inspiration to pursue a better life in the future.

I hope you are having a good day. :)


T. Glenda


I cannot image I’m not happy in 20 years later because I will have experienced many things of the life.

>> I can\'t imagine that I\'m not happy 20 years from now because I will have experienced many things in life.

But only my looks, physical ability and people around me will have been changed.

>> Only my physical looks, abilities and people around me will have been changed.

In 20years later, I’m 50years old, so, I may be a father of my children around 10~15 years old and my wife would be 30~35.

>> 20 years from now, I will be 50 years old and a father to my children that will be around 10-15 years old and a husband to my wife who will be 30-35 years old.

As a father of my family, I do my job well and make good result in my company or my own company.

>> Correct

or

>>> As a head of my family, I will do my job well and will make a good result in my company or in my own company.

In private and work, I enjoy the happiness in my daily life. Finally, I will be able to speak English and Chinese fluently which make my life more delight.

>> In my private life and at work, I will be enjoying the happiness in my life daily. Finally, I will be able to speak English and Chinese fluently which will make my life more delightful.

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