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2017-09-09 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

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I’m so proud of Korean GeunSung which means the nature of doing something we want to achieve persistently even there are many obstacles or even we failed. I think it is related to the Army culture based on hierarchy which I don’t like. For example, if a superordinate give some task to subordinate, the subordinate does the tasks until a superordinate is satisfied. I really don’t like this kind of culture, however, I partially agree that this kind of culture helps us have persistence and it helped Korea develop our economic scale in a very short time.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^^

Good evening! ^^

I appreciate you sharing about this aspect of your culture.

It truly is something to be proud of.

It is a strong foundation of one nation. :)

I hope that the next generation will get to appreciate and embrace this about our culture.

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I’m so proud of Korean GeunSung which means the nature of doing something we want to achieve persistently even there are many obstacles or even we failed.

>> I’m so proud of Korean GeunSung which means the nature of doing something we want to achieve persistently even if there are many obstacles or even if we failed.

I think it is related to the Army culture based on hierarchy which I don’t like.

>> Correct

For example, if a superordinate give some task to subordinate, the subordinate does the tasks until a superordinate is satisfied.

>> For example, if a superior give some task to a subordinate, the subordinate will do the tasks until the superior is satisfied.

I really don’t like this kind of culture, however, I partially agree that this kind of culture helps us have persistence and it helped Korea develop our economic scale in a very short time.

>> Correct

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