2017/09/11 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^^
Good evening! ^^
I really hope that you would be able to find a good and comfortable place
when you go back to Japan. :)
That\'s the hassle when you are tight with time to find a place.
Wishing you well on that. ;)
T. Glenda
I would like to go to japan now to investigate where I live after I come back to Japan.
>> I would like to go to Japan now to check where will I live when I go back there.
Because I have only two weeks to find my new place, I think it is very tight for me to find the new place.
>> Correct
or
>>> Because I only have two weeks to find a new place and I think it is not enough for me to find a new place.
Also, I can only look around the sites from 18:00 in evening after work.
>> In addition, I only have 18:00 in the evening after work to look for a place.
Even, I’m able to check some places on the internet in advance but, I’m not sure the actual place is the same as my image based on the picture I check on the internet.
>> Even if I was able to check some places on the internet, I\'m still unsure of the actual place if it is the same as what is on the internet.
I Strongly want to find good place for the new living in Japan.
>> Correct
or
>>> I really want to find a good place to stay when I get back in Japan.
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