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2017-09-13 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

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I would like to go to japan now to investigate where I live after I come back to Japan. Because I have only two weeks to find my new place, I think it is very tight for me to find the new place. Also, I can only look around the sites from 18:00 in evening after work. Even, I’m able to check some places on the internet in advance but, I’m not sure the actual place is the same as my image based on the picture I check on the internet. I Strongly want to find good place for the new living in Japan.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^^

Good evening! ^^

I really hope that you would be able to find a good and comfortable place

when you go back to Japan. :)

That\'s the hassle when you are tight with time to find a place. 

Wishing you well on that. ;)


T. Glenda 


I would like to go to japan now to investigate where I live after I come back to Japan.

>> I would like to go to Japan now to check where will I live when I go back there.

Because I have only two weeks to find my new place, I think it is very tight for me to find the new place.

>> Correct

or

>>> Because I only have two weeks to find a new place and I think it is not enough for me to find a new place.

Also, I can only look around the sites from 18:00 in evening after work.

>> In addition, I only have 18:00 in the evening after work to look for a place.

Even, I’m able to check some places on the internet in advance but, I’m not sure the actual place is the same as my image based on the picture I check on the internet.

>> Even if I was able to check some places on the internet, I\'m still unsure of the actual place if it is the same as what is on the internet.

 I Strongly want to find good place for the new living in Japan.

>> Correct

or

>>> I really want to find a good place to stay when I get back in Japan.

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