2017/09/22 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^^
Good evening! ^^
Thank you for still going over the homework. I know that
you are now a bity busy because of preparation for the transfer.
This makes sense and I will definitely agree with it.
Your physical possessions won\'t matter at the end.
T. Glenda
I would put my check card having all my money and my identification documents into the backpack.
>> Correct
or
>>> I will put my check card that has all my money and my identification documents in my backpack.
So, I could start over whenever and wherever I want.
>> So, I can start over whenever and wherever I want.
Nowadays, physical possession doesn’t mean a lot to the people compare to the past because most of the important assets are being transferred to online space.
>> Nowadays, physical possession doesn’t mean a lot to people compared to the past because most of the important assets are being transferred to online space.
So, even if my every physical possession would be eliminated, it wouldn’t be so serious.
>> So, even if my every physical possessions will be eliminated, it will not be so serious.
or
>>> So even if my every physical possessions will be taken or gone, it will not be so serious.
On the contrary, It would be good for me to clear all of my unnecessary things.
>> Correct
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