[2017-10-26]Homework

2017-10-27 · 첨삭 강사 May

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Many countries want to host international events, while other countries think that hosting international events can cause more problems than benefits. Do you agree with this? Why or why not? I agree to host international events. Because it's promote the host country to other countries. The problems of hosting international events are short-term, I think the benefits are a long-term.

강사 첨삭

Hi Carrie! You have good answers in this homework. I will give you more essay questions for you to practice more writing English. Thank you! Have a nice weekend with your husband! ^^

~~Teacher May~~

I agree to host international events.

Because it\'s promote the host country to other countries.

>> I agree that many countries like to host international events because it helps them promote their own country.
The problems of hosting international events are short-term,

>> The problems in hosting an international event are just small and don\'t last longer.
I think the benefits are a long-term.

>> I think we can get long-term benefits.

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