2017.11.07 Homework

2017-11-09 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

학생이 쓴 원문

If I could meet one artist, I could be the Kim nam kil. Because he is really good at acting, and He is so handsome. He has a sharp eyes. I think his sharp eyes is so attrative to me. I like him since I watched the movie, the title of the movie is 'the memoir of murde'. It gave me a lot of impression. That's why he became my favorite aritst, and I hope to see him in near future.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

Thank you for your composition.

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~~Teacher Sharon

If I could meet one artist I could be the Kim nam kil. Because he is really good at acting, and He is so handsome.

>> If I could meet one artist, it would be Kim Nam Gil because he is really good at acting and he is so handsome.

He has a sharp eyes.

>> He has sharp eyes.

I think his sharp eyes is so attrative to me.

>> His sharp eyes are so attractive for me.

I like him since I watched the movie, the title of the movie is \'the memoir of murde\'.

>> I have liked him since I watched his movie and the title of that movie is, \'Memoir of a Murderer.\'

It gave me a lot of impression.

>> It left a really good impression on me.

That\'s why he became my favorite aritst, and I hope to see him in near future.

>> That\'s why he became my favorite artist and I hope to see him in the near future.

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