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2017-02-03 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

학생이 쓴 원문

Dear. MS.Jeny Thank you for your feedback today. I take a courage from your comment. Thank you so much. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Q:Why is art important? Today, I went to the art exbhition with my freind. It is about FORNASETTI. He is a artist, designer, collector, stylist and director etc. not to mention a legend in 90's. His art works are wit and humorous. He broke the boundary of art and design. I am impressed his way from a different for a view. For example, he remainds many self-portrait, It is difference in a way to express. He makes into the special things from the common things. Let me back to your question, art is desire of expression. Sometimes we need to easy from our suppressed feelings like FORNASETTI. Art have a place from prehistoric ages. Life is art. Therefore art is important.

강사 첨삭


Hello [이름],
Time is flying so fast like a blink of an eye. I just hope this week is going smoothly with you!
You\'ve done a great job!I have to say, each passing day that we\'re having classes there are some changes in you. It may not lead you right away to the perfection and mastery of the language but at least you\'re getting there step by step! Never give up and just keep yourself motivated!

Take care
!!!
T. Jeny


Dear. MS.Jeny

>>correct
 Thank you for your feedback today.

>>correct

 I take a courage from your comment.

>>I got some courage from your comment.

Thank you so much.

>>correct
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Q:Why is art important?

>>correct
 Today, I went to the art exbhition with my freind.

>>Today, I went to an art exhibit with my friend.

It is about FORNASETTI.

>>correct

He is a artist, designer, collector, stylist and director etc. not to mention a legend in 90\'s.

>>He is an artist,  designer, collector, stylist, director etc. not to mention a legend in  the 90\'s.

His art works are wit and humorous.

>>correct

He broke the boundary of art and design.

>>correct

I am impressed his way from a different for a view.

>>I am impressed with his different view.

For example, he remainds many self-portrait, It is difference in a way to express.

>>For example, he has many self-portraits and it is express in a different way.

He makes into the special things from the common things.

>>He makes it into special things from common things.
 Let me back to your question, art is desire of expression.

>>Let me go back to your question, art is an expression of once desire.
Sometimes we need to easy from our suppressed feelings like FORNASETTI.

>>Sometimes we need to make it easy from our suppressed feelings like FORNASETTI.
Art have a place from prehistoric ages. Life is art. Therefore art is important.

>>Art has a place from prehistoric ages. Life is art. Therefore art is important.

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