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2017-02-06 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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Dear. Ms. [Name] you have a nice weekend? I had a wonderful friday in Itaewon(이태원)where is in Seoul. I have a freind who studying in Japan. We have been met terminally. So I met her yesterday and she introduced her German freinds. They wondering drink cultures of Korea, so we introduced chi-maek(chickin&beer), soju, drink games and the most hottest club in Itaewon. When I'm talking in English with German, It need a lot of energy. But It's great oppertunity using English. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- Homework answers. 1. anyone 2. someone 3. any 4. some 5. anybody 6. any 7. some 8. somebody 9. some 10. someone

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름] !!!

It was nice to receive your homework. I do hope that you can find time to review the corrections that I\'ve made, But I congratulate you for writing an essay. I do believe that you can further improve your writing skills. Good job and keep it up!!!!

T.Jeny


Dear. Ms. [Name]

>>correct
 Did you have a nice weekend?

>>correct

I had a wonderful friday in Itaewon(이태원)where is in Seoul.

>>I had a wonderful Friday in Itaewon(이태원)in Seoul.

I have a freind who studying in Japan.

>>I have a freind who is studying in Japan.

We have been met terminally.

>>We met in the terminal.

So I met her yesterday and she introduced her German friends.

>>correct

They wondering drink cultures of Korea, so we introduced chi-maek(chickin&beer), soju, drink games and the most hottest club in Itaewon.

>>They are wondering about the drinking culture in Korea, so we introduced chi-maek(chickin&beer), soju, drink games and the hottest club in Itaewon.

When I\'m talking in English with German, It need a lot of energy.

>>correct

But It\'s great opportunity using English.

>>But It was a great opportunity for me to use English.
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Homework answers.
1. anyone

>>I waited till 11 o’clock, but nobody came.
 2. someone

>>There is somebody at the door
 3. any

>>correct
 4. some

>>correct
 5. anybody

>>correct
 6. any

>>correct
 7. some

>> There is hardly any wheat left.
 8. somebody

>>You never give me any help.
 9. some

>> We got there without any difficulty.
 10. someone

>>I hope he marries somebody nice.  

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