20170208_homework

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Q : How much of a problem is obesity in your country?

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 We have a problem with high school students\' obesity.

>>We have a problem with high school students who are obese.
According to research of Chung-Bok Education Center, There are 26.24% and 18.09% each boys and girls MBI of senior.

>>correct
It increase MBI rate form freshman to senior.

>>correct

Reseachers analyze cause of increase rate that they don\'t have enough P.E calss because they replace self-studying from P.E for going to the University.

>>Researchers analyzed the cause of the increase in rate,  and they discovered that students don\'t have enough P.E calss because they replaced it with self-studying from P.E to going to the University.

 It\'s same when I was high school studesnt. I really didn\'t understand why I studied only Korean, math and english. It\'s so awful. 

>>It\'s same when I was a high school student, I really didn\'t understand why I only studied Korean, math and english. It was so awful. 
 In case of adult, There are 33% obesity.

>> In case of adults, it is a 33% obesity rate.

Especially men\'s obesity rate has been increase from 31.4% to 35.4% for 8years.

>>Especially men\'s obesity rate had been increased from 31.4% to 35.4% for 8years.

 I think Koreans getting obese because of changing of eating habits.

>>I think Koreans are getting obese because of the changing eating habits.
 We need to exercsie or healthy eating habits.

>>We need to exercsie or have healthy eating habits.