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2017-02-15 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi, Jeny. It's long time no see on the internet. I apologize with my bad atittude about homework. It is so hard doing somethimg everyday. Anyway, here you are today's homework. ------------------------------------------ Q : How important is a person's appearance? It's quite important in mordern society. Because we indicate whole thing about people at the first time. And we judge by their appearance. We need T.P.O(time, place, occasion) fashion and right look on own face when relate someome. Nowdays, We can connecting whole world on SNS, so visual things are important. But I'm not talking about beauty or plastic surgery. It is way to express about personality. Even though you are pretty or ugly, It's not important. The important thing is a image that you wants to show. As they say, Don't judge book by its cover. Well, It's true but we pick up the book by its cover.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름],
Time is flying so fast like a blink of an eye. I just hope this week is going smoothly with you!
You\'ve done a great job! I have to say, each passing day that we\'re having classes there are some changes in you. It may not lead you right away to the perfection and mastery of the language but at least you\'re getting there step by step! Never give up and just keep yourself motivated!

Take care
!!!
T. Jeny


Hi, Jeny.

It\'s long time no see on the internet.

>>Long time no see on the internet.

I apologize with my bad atittude about homework.

>>correct

It is so hard doing somethimg everyday.

>>correct

Anyway, here you are today\'s homework.

>>Anyway, here\'s my homework for today.
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Q : How important is a person\'s appearance?

>>correct
 It\'s quite important in mordern society.

>>correct

 Because we indicate whole thing about people at the first time.

>>Because we indicate something on people the first time we meet them.

And we judge by their appearance.

>>correct

We need T.P.O(time, place, occasion) fashion and right look on own face when relate someome.

>>We need T.P.O(time, place, occasion) fashion and right look when we meet someone.

Nowdays, We can connecting whole world on SNS, so visual things are important.

>>correct

But I\'m not talking about beauty or plastic surgery.

>>correct\\

It is way to express about personality.

>>It is a way to express a person\'s personality.

Even though you are pretty or ugly, It\'s not important.

>>correct

The important thing is a image that you wants to show.

>>The important thing is the image that you want to show.

 As they say, Don\'t judge book by its cover. 

>> As they say, Don\'t judge a book by its cover. 

 Well, It\'s true but we pick up the book by its cover.

>> Well, It\'s true, we pick a book by its cover.

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