2018/01/26 Homework

2018-01-29 · 첨삭 강사 Grace

학생이 쓴 원문

1. The men in question Harold Keene, Jim Peterson, and Gerald Greene, deserve awards. → The men in question who are Harold Keene, Jim Peterson, and Gerald Greene deserve awards. 2. Several countries participated in the airlift Italy, Belgium, France, and Luxembourg. → Several countries participated in the airlift that are Italy, Belgium, France, and Luxembourg. 3. There's no room for error, said the engineer so we have to double check every calculation. → There's no room for error said by the engineer, so we have to double check every calculation. 4. Judge Carswell later to be nominated for the Supreme Court had ruled against civil rights. → Judge Carswell to be nominated later for the Supreme Court where had ruled against civil rights. 5. In last week's New Yorker, one of my favorite magazines, I enjoyed reading Leland's article How Not to Go Camping. → In last week's New Yorker, wich one of my favorite magazines, I enjoyed reading Leland's article How Not to Go Camping.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름] :)

Thank you so much for doing your homework :)

And this is your corrections:

1. The men in question who are Harold Keene, Jim Peterson, and Gerald Greene deserve awards.

>> Correct!

2. Several countries participated in the airlift that are Italy, Belgium, France, and Luxembourg.

>> Several countries participated in the airlift: Italy, Belgium, France, and Luxembourg.

3. There\'s no room for error said by the engineer, so we have to double check every calculation.

>> \"There\'s no room for error,\" said the engineer, \"so we have to double check every calculation.\"

4. Judge Carswell to be nominated later for the Supreme Court where had ruled against civil rights.

>> Judge Carswell--later to be nominated for the Supreme Court--had ruled against civil rights.

5. In last week\'s New Yorker, which one of my favorite magazines, I enjoyed reading Leland\'s article How Not to Go Camping.

>> In last week\'s New Yorker, one of my favorite magazines, I enjoyed reading Leland\'s article \"How Not to Go Camping.\"

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