2018/02/09 Homework

2018-02-12 · 첨삭 강사 Grace

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1. I have [a] horse of my own. I call her Pretty Girl. She is intelligent animal, but she is not [a] thoroughbred horse. 2. [The] horse knows when he is going to race. He does not have [a] saddle on his back. [The] horse is nervous. other horses are already ahead of him. During [the] race, Eventually [The] horse gets to run as fast as he can. Exercise boy, 3.They have [a] good lunch, hear [a] good program, and continue their fundraising program for worthy organization, such as [a] local hospital.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름] :)

Thank you so much and I really appreciate that you did your homework ^_~

And this is your corrections! :)

. I have [a] horse of my own. I call her Pretty Girl. She is intelligent animal, but she is not [a] thoroughbred horse.
>> I have a horse of my own. I call her Pretty Girl. She is an intelligent animal, but she is not a thoroughbred horse.

2. [The] horse knows when he is going to race.

>> A horse knows when he is going to race.

He does not have [a] saddle on his back.

>> CORRECT!

[The] horse is nervous.

>> CORRECT

other horses are already ahead of him.

>> CORRECT

During [the] race,

>> CORRECT

Eventually [The] horse gets to run as fast as he can.

>> CORRECT

Exercise boy,

>> The exercise boy,

3.They have [a] good lunch, hear [a] good program, and continue their fundraising program for worthy organization, such as [a] local hospital.

>> They have a good lunch, hear a good program, and continue their fundraising program for a worthy organization, such as a local hospital.

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