2018/03/09 Homework

2018-03-12 · 첨삭 강사 Grace

학생이 쓴 원문

The best thing of my family is they are kind and my both parents are very good at cooking. My father is very kind to other people and can make awesome kicmchi fried rice. My mother also can make gorgeous Korean traditional dishes that made me have a good taste. Every time I go back to Korea, my mother cooks a lot of dishes to feed me well. My younger sister listens to my words well and she is willing to send me what I want to get from Korea.

강사 첨삭

Hi. [이름] :)

I envy your family..

Anyways, you have an awesome and fabulous family.

So this is your corrections for your homework:

The best thing of my family is they are kind and my both parents are very good at cooking.

>>The best thing about my family is they are kind and both of my parents are very good at cooking.
My father is very kind to other people and can make awesome kicmchi fried rice.

>> My father is very kind to other people and he can make an awesome kimchi fried rice.

My mother also can make gorgeous Korean traditional dishes that made me have a good taste.

>> My mother, she can also make a gorgeous Korean traditional dishes that made me happy every time that I will eat the food that she made for me.

Every time I go back to Korea, my mother cooks a lot of dishes to feed me well.

>> Every time that I go back to Korea, my mother, she cooks a lot of dishes to feed me well.

My younger sister listens to my words well and she is willing to send me what I want to get from Korea.

>>My younger sister, she listens to my advise well and she is willing to send me what I want to get from Korea.

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