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2018-03-20 · 첨삭 강사 Grace

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My girlfriend inspires in life nowadays. I met her in Singapore and she has a very positive attitude to all of things she faces. I also love to be optimistic so, she and I are good match. After I went back to japan, her attitude affect me that I can do more than I do, even we are separated. She also does her best in her job in the lonely situation. I believe thinking of each other gives us more energy to improve ourselves. ※To teacher. I was suddenly given some tasks in my work today so I couldn’t help to hold the class for a while. See you next month. By the way, could you advise me why my scores got lower??

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!

I understand don\'t worry about it.

About you scores we had a sudden change in the scoring system.

My girlfriend inspires in life nowadays.

>> My girlfriend inspires me nowadays.

I met her in Singapore and she has a very positive attitude to all of things she faces.

>> I met her in Singapore and she has a very positive attitude to all of the things she faces.

I also love to be optimistic so, she and I are good match.

>> I also love to be an optimist ,so she and I are a good match

After I went back to japan, her attitude affect me that I can do more than I do, even we are separated.

>>After I went back to Japan, her attitude affects me that I can do more than I do, even we are separated.

She also does her best in her job in the lonely situation.

>> CORRECT!

>> OR: She does her best even though she feels lonely.

I believe thinking of each other gives us more energy to improve ourselves.

>> CORRECT!

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