2018.07.03.

Hi, [이름]!

Thank you for answering our essay question.

I loved reading about your opinions in relation to this.

The family is the basic foundation unit of the society.

This is because most of us rely on our families in times of need.

In addition to that, we share our happiness with our families.

I guess that\'s why we consider our families as very important.

I hope you\'re doing great. See you in class later.

Take care. ^_^

~Teacher Charry

I think that family is very important.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> In my opinion, family is very important.

Because it raise me up. 

>> It\'s because it is where we are raised up.
For example, even I am exhaused and tired, I can keep the steam up thinking my family. 

>> For example, even if I am exhausted and tired, I can keep up the steam by thinking of my family. 
When I enjoy something tiny with my son and husband, my feeling doubles.

>> When I enjoy something tiny with my son and husband, my feeling magnifies.

OR >> When I enjoy simple things with my son and husband, my happiness magnifies.