2018. 10. 26 Homework

2018-11-02 · 첨삭 강사 Gina

학생이 쓴 원문

I hope that I'm not late too much with this homework. My difficult decision was going to Austrailia for Working holiday. Because I worried about my mother. She had a gastric cancer 8 years ago and breast cancer was followed on her. She had the surgeries and try to recover her health now but I know her thoughts that maybe she doesn't has lot of certain time. And she is sensitive so she worries about me too much. So I know that if I leave her-even if very short time- she must worries very much and misses me everyday. But also I can't give up my passion and dream of my youth, I decided difficultly. Now I know-honestly it is wish- she will be Okay, and lives long time happly with me!

강사 첨삭

Hello Su [이름]!


It\'s okay. I appreciate it that your still submitting your answer for this homework. You can actually make or submit your homework or compositions anytime especially on your free time. ^^


Su [이름], you\'re a very strong person. This decision that you made was really difficult because of the circumstances. I hope that you will be able to reach your dreams and do what you love to do. I also wish and hope that your mother would completely recover her health so that your wish of living with her for a long time would happen. ^^ I admire you, Su [이름]. I wish the best for you.


~Teacher Gina


My difficult decision was going to Austrailia for Working holiday. Because I worried about my mother. She had a gastric cancer 8 years ago and breast cancer was followed on her. She had the surgeries and try to recover her health now but I know her thoughts that maybe she doesn\'t has lot of certain time. And she is sensitive so she worries about me too much. So I know that if I leave her-even if very short time- she must worries very much and misses me everyday. But also I can\'t give up my passion and dream of my youth, I decided difficultly. Now I know-honestly it is wish- she will be Okay, and lives long time happly with me!


>> My most difficult decision was going to Australia for a working holiday because I was worried about my mother. She had gastric cancer 8 years ago and she had breast cancer afterwards. She had the surgeries and she\'s trying to recover her health now but I know her thoughts that maybe she doesn\'t have a lot of time. She is sensitive so she worries about me too much. So I know that if I leave her- even if it\'s just for a very short time- she would worry and miss me very much everyday. But I also can\'t give up my passion and dream of my youth, it was a very difficult decision for me. Now I know, honestly it is to wish that she will be okay and that she will live fro a long time happily with me.

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