2018.10.29 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
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Just always believe in yourself that you can do it. With positive thoughts and hard work, you\'ll definitely achieve your goal. ^^
Thank you for submitting your homework. I really like the idea of your answer. I guess, transportation is the first thing that will be enhanced in the future as well.
Well, I hope that you\'ll have a good night ahead. And I\'ll talk to you later. :)
~Teacher Gina
I think the most advanced is the
transportation 100 years later. Because this is globalized age already, we
should go to everywhere wherever we want. But there are many limits of time
because of the distance. So I think the people will try to enhance the
transport technology at first. Then we will can go to London for an hour, I
suppose. And I think the things that will not change are book and pen.
Because they have their own mood and feelings when we read books and use
pens. The feelings when we read books with E-book reader are very differents
from touching and smelling the real paper and also writing down some memoes
or underlining. Computer typing is very different from handwriting too. So
they will not disappear because of sensitive people. It\'s like the case that
even if the E-mail appears but the letter have stays here.
>> I think the transportation system would be the most advanced 100 years later. We should be able to go anywhere and whenever we want because we\'re in a globalized age already. However, we are limited with time because of the distances we travel so I think people will try to enhance the transport technology first. Then we will be able to go to London in an hour, I suppose. And I think the things that will not change are books and pens because whenever we read books and use pens, it give us different set of moods and feelings. The feelings when we read books with E-book reader are very different from touching and smelling the real paper and also writing down some memo or underlines. Computer typing is very different from handwriting too. So they will not disappear because of sensitive people. It\'s like the case of having E-mails but exchanging hand-written letters still remains.
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