2018. 10. 30 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Su [이름]!
It\'s fine, no worries. I\'m happy that you enjoy learning English because you want to and not because you have to. That\'s the right mind set. You also don\'t have to apologize to me when there are moments where you\'re not able to listen or understand me. I\'m here because I want to help and teach you to become better. We\'re partners on this, right? ^^ Thank you also for always trying. On our classes, I can actually feel it and I really appreciate that. ^^
~Teacher Gina
Well, the dream place I want to live is Seoul. Because I love cultural life such as watching mucical performances, plays, street performances but these are usually in Seoul. Also theres are many spots to skate boarding, many lectures and events for women\'s rights. So I will live in Seoul for a month during my gap year. Or I\'ll find my workplace in Seoul if I can. And I have to enhance my grade in the rest semesters for that.
>> Well, the dream place I want to live in is Seoul. I want to live there because I love cultural life such as watching musical performances, plays and street performances and these are usually found in Seoul. There are also many sports like skateboarding and many lectures and events for women\'s rights. So I will live in Seoul for a month during my gap year or I\'ll find my workplace in Seoul if I can. So I have to enhance my grades for the rest of the semesters for that.
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