2018. 10. 31 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, Su [이름]!
Thank you for letting me know what happened last night. I was actually worried when your phone was just ringing when I called you. I\'m glad that you are okay and nothing bad happened to you. You don\'t have to worry, I understand that you were busy yesterday and you were tired so you fell asleep. I also had those moments before so I could relate. ^^ See you tonight! :)
I regret my spending habit. I had two jobs(actually now I have just one), so I made many money and it was for my working holiday and living. But once my will have been fell down and I wasted the savings. Some months later, I recovered the will. Buy I had to save money from the beginning! My savings are gone and there is nothing that can phisically see. However, I\'m always Okay as usual. Because I can make money again and I was happy at that time! It was just a little happening.
>> I regret my spending habit. I had two jobs (actually now, I just have one) so I made a lot of money and it was for my working holiday and living expenses. But I lost my will once and I wasted my savings. I recovered my will again some months later. However, I have to save money all over again. My savings were gone and there\'s nothing left to see but I\'m okay as usual because I can make money again and I was happy at that time. It was not a big deal.
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