2018. 11. 01 My three goals of this year

2018-11-05 · 첨삭 강사 Gina

학생이 쓴 원문

I like this topic! Because I'm called a passion person by my friends. I will tell you about my three goals for this year. The first is finishing the CNN's scripts. I'm studing English listening, writing, reading skills with CNN's scripts book and it lefts more than half so I will finish it before the end of this year. So I try to study it little by little everyday. The second one is improve my grades up to 3.5 grade for beautiful ending before getting gap years. Already there are very few days but in other hand, I can make it if I try hardly from now on. And I will review the classes before final exams period. The final one is be permitted having gap years to my parents and get the Austrailia's visa. I'm little bit nervous to tell my father however I will call and convince him. And then, getting the visa is nothing.

강사 첨삭

Hi Su [이름]!


Good evening!

I\'m glad that you like the topic of the homework I gave.

I can tell from your answers that you\'re really a passionate person. You have clear goals to achieve.

I hope that you\'ll reach all of them. ^^ You can do it!


~Teacher Gina




I like this topic! Because I\'m called a passion person by my friends.
I will tell you about my three goals for this year. The first is finishing the CNN\'s scripts. I\'m studing English listening, writing, reading skills with CNN\'s scripts book and it lefts more than half so I will finish it before the end of this year. So I try to study it little by little everyday. The second one is improve my grades up to 3.5 grade for beautiful ending before getting gap years. Already there are very few days but in other hand, I can make it if I try hardly from now on. And I will review the classes before final exams period. The final one is be permitted having gap years to my parents and get the Austrailia\'s visa. I\'m little bit nervous to tell my father however I will call and convince him. And then, getting the visa is nothing.


>> I like this topic because I was called a passionate person by my friends.

I will tell you about my three goals for this year. The first one would be finishing the CNN\'s scripts. I\'m studying English listening, writing and reading skills with CNN\'s script book. More than half of the pages are still left so I will finish it before the end of this year. That is why I try to study it little by little everyday. The second one is to improve my grades up to 3.5 to have a beautiful ending before getting the gap years. There are a few days left but in other hand, I can make it if I try hard from now on. I will also review the classes before the final exams period. The final one is to get the permission of my parents in having gap years and to get a visa to Australia. I\'m a little bit nervous to tell this to my father however, I will call and convince him. After this, getting the visa is nothing.

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