2018. 11. 05 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Su [이름]!
Good evening!
Oh, I\'m excited to listen to your good news. I have a guess on what it is but I\'m not sure.
Anyway, than you for submitting your homework. I totally agree that having our own home would be the best. And if it will not be given as a gift to us, it\'s fine because we can still work hard and save for it. :)
See you later! ^^
~Teacher Gina
If I can get a gift from my family regardness cost, I want to get my own house. Because I already live with just a friend but I want to live alone. I will never get marriage so I need a my own house for that. If I have my own house, I can save money easily and then I don\'t have to think about depand on men. And my single life will be completed. But they cannot give me a house and actually marriage with men can\'t give me economic value added. Because of their lack of ability, many risks and child rearing expenses. So I will work hard and save money by not going to spending unnecessary expenses such as cosmetics and uncomfortable clothes with just looking good. And my life will be clean now and for ever.
>> If I can get a gift from my family regardless of the cost, I want to have my own house. I already live with a friend but I want to live alone. I will never get married so I need my own house. If I have my own house, I can save money easily and I don\'t have to think about depending on any man. My single life will be completed then. However, they cannot give me a house and actually marriage with men can\'t give me an additional economic value because of their lack of ability, risks and child rearing expenses. So I will work hard and save money by not spending unnecessary expenses such as cosmetics and uncomfortable clothes which only look good. And so my life will be clear now and forever.
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