2018. 11. 06 My opinoin about recycling

2018-11-07 · 첨삭 강사 Gina

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Thank you for your encouragement. As a matter of fact, I'm worried about my ability of listening English because three weeks passed since I started this lesson but I still can't understand long and fast sentences even if I'm studying with CNN and application. So I wondered what should I do to use this lesson more effectively. But I become assured reading your comment! Anyway, I am going to go talk about my opinion about recycling. Recycling is definitly important today. Have you ever seen the picture of polar bear on very small ice piece? Not recycling is one of the main culprit of the global warming and resources depletion. I know that is sometimes inconvenient but if we want to live in clean earth with normal weather, we should all recycle. For instance, we can use reusuable papers and eco-friendly products and should separate the used paper, plastics, cans and glass bottle. Also we should use paper bag or shopping bad instead of plastic bag. These are not difficult so we can do it.

강사 첨삭

Hi Su [이름]!

Good evening!

You\'re always welcome! Always remember to believe in yourself. ^^

~Teacher Gina

Anyway, I am going to go talk about my opinion about recycling. Recycling is definitly important today. Have you ever seen the picture of polar bear on very small ice piece? Not recycling is one of the main culprit of the global warming and resources depletion. I know that is sometimes inconvenient but if we want to live in clean earth with normal weather, we should all recycle. For instance, we can use reusuable papers and eco-friendly products and should separate the used paper, plastics, cans and glass bottle. Also we should use paper bag or shopping bad instead of plastic bag. These are not difficult so we can do it.

>> Anyway, I am going to go talk about my opinion about recycling. Recycling is definitely important today. Have you ever seen the picture of the polar bear on a very small piece of ice? Not recycling is one of the main culprit of the global warming and resources depletion. I know that it is sometimes inconvenient but if we want to live in a clean earth with normal weather, we should all recycle. For instance, we can use reusable papers and eco-friendly products and should separate the used paper, plastics, cans and glass bottle. Also we should use paper bag or shopping bad instead of plastic bag. These are not difficult so we can do it.

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