2018.11.08 About Chinese people in Jeju island

2018-11-08 · 첨삭 강사 Gina

학생이 쓴 원문

I don't know why they did that, but I heard that the Chinese people have purchased a lot of land and buildings of Jeju island. Many Chinese tourists went there and have used the only place where Chinese invested. A Chinese man took a illegal photo of Korean women with a hidden camera in sexual sight, another Chinese men hit the Korean people and most of them disturbed the Korean rules, economy and the life of the local people. So some sociologists and economists in Korea was worried about if they can occupy the Jeju island. Also I heard that the rate of Chinese tourist was decreased in these days but they still grab the land of Jeju and they will not resell it to local people. I don't hate Chinese but there are problems because of them. To make matters worse, so many fake illegal refugee men from Yemen dropped in Jeju without warning to live in there because the Korean rules about refugees are not tight than the other countries. That's what happend in Jeju.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon, Su [이름]!


Thank you for sending me this and explaining the current situation in Jeju Island. I didn\'t know that aside from the Chinese grab[이름]g lands of Jeju, there is also a problem with fake illegal refugees. I hope that these problems will be solved at the soonest possible time because the people who suffers from these are the locals who should have the rights on their own land.


See you later!


~Teacher Gina





I don\'t know why they did that, but I heard that the Chinese people have purchased a lot of land and buildings of Jeju island. Many Chinese tourists went there and have used the only place where Chinese invested. A Chinese man took a illegal photo of Korean women with a hidden camera in sexual sight, another Chinese men hit the Korean people and most of them disturbed the Korean rules, economy and the life of the local people. So some sociologists and economists in Korea was worried about if they can occupy the Jeju island. Also I heard that the rate of Chinese tourist was decreased in these days but they still grab the land of Jeju and they will not resell it to local people. I don\'t hate Chinese but there are problems because of them. To make matters worse, so many fake illegal refugee men from Yemen dropped in Jeju without warning to live in there because the Korean rules about refugees are not tight than the other countries. That\'s what happend in Jeju.


>> I don\'t know why they did that, but I heard that the Chinese people have purchased a lot of lands and buildings in Jeju island. Many Chinese tourists went there and only used the places where Chinese people invested. A Chinese man took illegal photos of Korean women using a hidden camera for sexual reasons. Other Chinese men hit Korean people and most of them disturbed that Korean rules, economy and life of the local people. So some sociologists and economists in Korea were worried on what may happen if they will occupy the Jeju island. I also heard that the rate of Chinese tourists decreased these days but they still grab lands of Jeju and they will not resell it to the locals. I don\'t hate Chinese but there are problems because of them. To make matters worse, there were many fake illegal refugees from Yemen who went to Jeju to live there without any warnings because the Korean rues about refugees are not tight compared to other countries. That\'s what happened in Jeju.

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