2018.11.09 homework

2018-11-12 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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Edward Murphy was a member of an Air Force team that performed complicated experiments during the 1) 1940s. His work required much preparation and perfect execution. Murphy has become renowned for 2) “Murphy’s Law”, which states that “if anything can go 3) wrong, it will.” 4) This hilarious observation has spawned a plethora of 5) corollaries, such as Hofstadter’s Law: “It always takes longer than you expect, even when you take Hofstadter's Law into account.” 6) These witty musings on the perceived perversity of daily life have been published in 7)several books, but some of the volumes are general in 8) scope; while others pertain to technical careers in aerospace or professional areas such as medicine or law. +) I don’t understand last two sentences. I’m not sure that is correct answers.

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]!
How are you? I am already excited to talk with you.
Anyway, thank you for doing this homework.
I included the correct answers below. Kindly go over them.
See you later!
~Teacher Shanee^^,

Edward Murphy was a member of an Air Force team that performed complicated experiments during the 1) 1940s.
>>> Correct!
His work required much preparation and perfect execution. Murphy has become renowned for 2) “Murphy’s Law”,
>>> Correct!
which states that “if anything can go 3) wrong, it will.”
>>> Correct!
4) This hilarious observation has spawned a plethora of
>>> This comical observation has spawned a plethora of
5) corollaries, such as Hofstadter’s Law: “It always takes longer than you expect, even when you take Hofstadter\'s Law into account.”
>>> Correct!
6) These witty musings on the perceived perversity of daily life have been published in
>>> Correct!
7)several books, but some of the volumes are general in
>>> several books. Some of the volumes are general in
8) scope; while others pertain to technical careers in aerospace or professional areas such as medicine or law.
>>> scope, while others pertain to technical careers in aerospace or professional areas such as medicine or law.
+) I don’t understand last two sentences. I’m not sure that is correct answers.
>>> I don\'t understand the last two sentences. I\'m not sure whether they are the correct answers.

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