2018. 11. 10 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Su [이름]!
Good afternoon! Indeed, having hopes in life would give us the strength and motivation to live and to reach our goals and dreams. ^^
See you later!
~Teacher Gina
I can\'t live without hope. My every single day is full with big and small hopes. One of my big hopes is like \'Tomorrow will be better than yesterday\' and my small hope is such as \'I\'m going to have a great supper\' or \'I can read a book tonight\' or \'I will have a passionate weeken.\' and these are the motive of my life. If I don\'t have any dreams and hopes, I wouldn\'t work hard, study and live strongly. I can live happily and can endure hard times because of the hope that tommorow will be better. So hope is the most important thing in my life.
>> I can\'t live without hope. My every single day is full with big and small hopes. One of my big hopes is like \'Tomorrow will be better than yesterday\' and my small hope is such as \'I\'m going to have a great supper\' or \'I can read a book tonight\' or \'I will have a passionate weekend.\' And these are the motivations of my life. If I don\'t have any dreams and hopes, I wouldn\'t work hard, study and live strongly. I can live happily and can endure hard times because of the hope that tommorow will be better. So having hope is the most important thing in my life.
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