2018. 11. 10 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good evening, Su [이름]!
I\'m glad that you met someone who you respect. I remembered that you went to a lecture last time. I really like it that there are lectures that talks about our rights as women. I hope that the world will be more fair for women.
~Teacher Gina
I haven\'t respect someone particular but I become to respect the professor of Women\'s study. Maybe you could remember that I participated to a lecture of Women\'s study, \'The political science of prostitution\', that was about men who have made prostitution and history of feminists. She told me that we need a systematic study and activities to get back our rights. And I saw the existence of feminism from her because she is a successful scholar, crusader and a person who is firm and brave. So she is a person who I respect.
>> I haven\'t respected someone in particular before until I met the professor of Women\'s Study. Maybe you could remember that I participated in a lecture of women\'s study, \"The Political Science of Prostitution\", that was about men who have made prostitution and history of feminists. She told me that we need a systematic study and activities to get back our rights. I saw the existence of feminism from her because she is a successful scholar, crusader and a person who is firm and brave. So she is a person who I respect.
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