2018. 11. 13 I can never give up this
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Hi Su [이름]!
Good evening!
I\'m so proud of you! I think it is very important for us to never give up on our beliefs especially if they are actually right. I also experienced this when I was in high school and in the university. Many of my classmates would cheat to get high scores. Sometimes, it\'s really unfair because they\'re getting higher grades and scores. But I just thought that at least, I know that I did not do anything wrong and I would have a clear conscience. ^^ Well, regarding YOLO, I was like that too. (LOL) Maybe we can just try to control it but not totally remove enjoyment in our system, right? As they say, we only live once and it\'s not that we\'re getting younger. ^^
~Teacher Gina
Sometimes, my belief doesn\'t always bring good output. I love my hobbies and chilling time so I don\'t go to a library to study when I don\'t want to do even if it\'s period of exam. However, I don\'t regret too much because it is from my mind and I like \'YOLO, You only live once\'. Sometimes I think it is to justificatory myself. Haha
>> If this question means something I can never give up, my answer would be my own belief. For example, there are a lot of cheating that happens during the school exam. Not a few students usually make cheating sheets, watch a smartphone while taking the exam and changing the wrong answers to a correct one when they mark the test sheet themselves. I feel uneasy about it because they get high scores and sometimes I get a lower grade than them. Honestly, I also thought of cheating but whenever it happens, I always think that it is wrong and I should keep my mind in doing the right thing.
Sometimes, my belief doesn\'t always bring a good output. I love doing my hobbies and spending time to chill out so I don\'t go to a library to study when I don\'t want to even if it\'s the exam period. However, I don\'t regret too much because it\'s from my mind and I like \'YOLO, You only live once\'. Sometimes, I think it is just to justify myself.
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