2018.11.14
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Su [이름]!
I agree that we should not judge a person by the way he or she looks, and that personality is more important than what we physically see in a person.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts on this. ^^
~Teacher Gina
>> I totally agree with it. Well, except for some exceptions, all of us shouldn\'t judge people with their appearances. The color of their skin, nationality, beauty, length of hair, weight and height don\'t matter in making friends and in knowing each other. I\'m not looking for an accessory to show off. I should focus on their personalities, soul and if we are compatible, not their appearances and beauty. I know that it is sometimes difficult, like an irresistible force because we all have different tastes and always have our first impressions. But we shouldn\'t speak about someone\'s appearances even if it was a compliment because someone may be influenced by what we say and he or especially she can get obsessed about how he or she looks such as looking perfect always.
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