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2018-11-26 · 첨삭 강사 Gina

학생이 쓴 원문

I appreciated to finish my weekdays with you. And always thank you for your words. I totally agree with it. Well, except the some exceptions, we all shouldn't judge the people with their appearences. The color of skin, nation, beauty, length of hair, weight, height are not matter to make friends and to know each other. If I'm not looking for an accessary to show off, I should focuse on their personalities, soul and I should check that am I happy when we are together, not their appearences and beauty. I know that's sometimes difficult like a irresistible force because we all have kind of taste and always got the first impressions. But we shouldn't speak out about someone's appearences even if it was a compliment because someone may influenced by our talk and he or especially she can gets obsessions such as always have to look perfect.

강사 첨삭

Hi Su [이름]!


I agree that we should not judge a person by the way he or she looks, and that personality is more important than what we physically see in a person.

Thank you for sharing your thoughts on this. ^^


~Teacher Gina


I totally agree with it. Well, except the some exceptions, we all shouldn\'t judge the people with their appearences. The color of skin, nation, beauty, length of hair, weight, height are not matter to make friends and to know each other. If I\'m not looking for an accessary to show off, I should focuse on their personalities, soul and I should check that am I happy when we are together, not their appearences and beauty. I know that\'s sometimes difficult like a irresistible force because we all have kind of taste and always got the first impressions. But we shouldn\'t speak out about someone\'s appearences even if it was a compliment because someone may influenced by our talk and he or especially she can gets obsessions such as always have to look perfect.


>> I totally agree with it. Well, except for some exceptions, all of us shouldn\'t judge people with their appearances. The color of their skin, nationality, beauty, length of hair, weight and height don\'t matter in making friends and in knowing each other. I\'m not looking for an accessory to show off. I should focus on their personalities, soul and if we are compatible, not their appearances and beauty. I know that it is sometimes difficult, like an irresistible force because we all have different tastes and always have our first impressions. But we shouldn\'t speak about someone\'s appearances even if it was a compliment because someone may be influenced by what we say and he or especially she can get obsessed about how he or she looks such as looking perfect always.

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